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English → Pt Preface Level 6/10

In the preface to my translation of the "Iliad" I have given my views as to the main principles by which a translator should be guided, and need not repeat them here, beyond pointing out that the initial liberty of translating poetry into prose involves the continual taking of more or less liberty throughout the translation; for much that is right in poetry is wrong in prose, and the exigencies of readable prose are the first things to be considered in a prose translation.

No prefácio da minha tradução da "Ilíada" expus os meus pontos de vista sobre os princípios fundamentais pelos quais um tradutor deve ser guiado, e não preciso repeti-los aqui, além de apontar que a liberdade inicial de traduzir poesia em prosa implica a contínua adoção de maior ou menor liberdade ao longo da tradução; pois muito do que é correto na poesia é errado na prosa, e as exigências de uma prosa legível são as primeiras coisas a serem consideradas numa tradução em prosa.

That the reader, however, may see how far I have departed from strict construe, I will print here Messrs. Butcher and Lang's translation of the sixty lines or so of the "Odyssey."

Para que o leitor, no entanto, possa ver até que ponto me afastei da interpretação estrita, reproduzirei aqui a tradução dos senhores Butcher e Lang das sessenta linhas ou mais da "Odisseia".

Their translation runs:

A tradução deles é a seguinte:

Tell me, Muse, of that man, so ready at need, who wandered far and wide, after he had sacked the sacred citadel of Troy, and many were the men whose towns he saw and whose mind he learnt, yea, and many the woes he suffered in his heart on the deep, striving to win his own life and the return of his company.

Fala-me, Musa, daquele homem tão pronto para a necessidade, que errou por terras longínquas e distantes, depois de ter saqueado a sagrada cidadela de Troia, e muitos foram os homens cujas cidades ele viu e cujo espírito conheceu, e muitos também os sofrimentos que suportou no coração sobre o mar profundo, lutando para salvar a sua própria vida e o regresso dos seus companheiros.

Nay, but even so he saved not his company, though he desired it sore.

Mas ainda assim não salvou os seus companheiros, embora muito o desejasse.

For through the blindness of their own hearts they perished, fools, who devoured the oxen of Helios Hyperion: but the god took from them their day of returning.

Pois pela cegueira dos seus próprios corações eles pereceram, insensatos que devoraram os bois de Hélio Hipérion: mas o deus lhes tirou o dia do regresso.

Of these things, goddess, daughter of Zeus, whencesoever thou hast heard thereof, declare thou even unto us.

Dessas coisas, ó deusa, filha de Zeus, onde quer que as tenhas ouvido, declara-as também a nós.

Vocabulary

No
In the; contraction of 'em' and 'o'
prefácio
Introductory section of a book; preface
da
Of the; contraction of 'de' and 'a'
minha
My; first-person singular feminine possessive pronoun
tradução
The act of converting text between languages
expus
Past tense of 'expor'; I presented or explained
os
The; masculine plural definite article
meus
My; first-person singular masculine plural possessive
pontos
Points, ideas, or topics raised in discussion
de
Of, from; common Portuguese preposition
vista
View, perspective, or point of observation
sobre
About, on, or concerning a topic
princípios
Fundamental rules or guiding beliefs
fundamentais
Essential, basic, or foundational in nature
pelos
By the; contraction of 'por' and 'os'
quais
Which; relative or interrogative pronoun, plural
um
A, an; masculine singular indefinite article
tradutor
Person who translates texts between languages
deve
Must, should; third-person singular of 'dever'
ser
To be; fundamental Portuguese infinitive verb
guiado
Guided, directed, or led by something
não
No, not; basic negation word in Portuguese
preciso
I need; first-person singular of 'precisar'
repeti-los
To repeat them; infinitive with object pronoun
aqui
Here; indicates proximity in place or context
além
Beyond, besides; indicates addition or distance
apontar
To point out or indicate something specifically
que
That, which, what; versatile conjunction or pronoun
a
The; feminine singular definite article
liberdade
Freedom, liberty; absence of restriction
inicial
Initial, first, or occurring at the beginning
traduzir
To translate text from one language to another
poesia
Poetry; literary art form using verse
em
In, at, on; common Portuguese preposition
prosa
Prose; ordinary written language, not poetry
implica
Implies or entails a consequence or condition
contínua
Continuous, ongoing, uninterrupted in nature
adoção
Adoption; act of choosing or accepting something
maior
Greater, larger; comparative adjective in Portuguese
ou
Or; disjunctive conjunction linking alternatives
menor
Lesser, smaller; comparative adjective in Portuguese
ao
To the; contraction of 'a' and 'o'
longo
Along, throughout; used in 'ao longo de'
pois
Because, for, since; causal conjunction
muito
Much, many, a lot; quantity adverb or adjective
do
Of the; contraction of 'de' and 'o'
é
Is; third-person singular present of 'ser'
correto
Correct, right, accurate, or proper
na
In the; contraction of 'em' and 'a'
errado
Wrong, incorrect, mistaken in judgment or fact
as
The; feminine plural definite article
exigências
Requirements, demands, or necessary conditions
uma
A, an; feminine singular indefinite article
legível
Readable, easy to read and understand
são
Are; third-person plural present of 'ser'
primeiras
First; feminine plural ordinal adjective
coisas
Things, items, or matters in general
serem
To be; infinitive plural form of 'ser'
consideradas
Considered, taken into account or thought about
numa
In a; contraction of 'em' and 'uma'
Para
For, to, in order to; common preposition
o
The; masculine singular definite article
leitor
Reader; person who reads a text
no
In the; contraction of 'em' and 'o'
entanto
However; used in 'no entanto' meaning nevertheless
possa
May, can; subjunctive of 'poder'
ver
To see; basic visual perception verb
até
Until, up to, even; preposition or conjunction
ponto
Point, degree, or extent of something
me
Me; first-person singular object pronoun
afastei
I moved away from or deviated from something
interpretação
Interpretation; explanation or understanding of meaning
estrita
Strict, literal, or rigorous in application
reproduzirei
I will reproduce; future tense of 'reproduzir'
dos
Of the; contraction of 'de' and 'os'
senhores
Gentlemen, misters; formal plural address
das
Of the; contraction of 'de' and 'as'
sessenta
Sixty; the number 60
linhas
Lines; rows of text in a written work
mais
More; comparative adverb or adjective
A
The; feminine singular definite article
deles
Theirs, of them; third-person plural possessive
seguinte
Following, next; what comes immediately after
Fala-me
Speak to me; imperative with object pronoun
daquele
Of that; contraction of 'de' and 'aquele'
homem
Man; adult male human being
tão
So, such; intensifying adverb before adjectives
pronto
Ready, quick, prompt in response or action
para
For, to; preposition indicating purpose or direction
necessidade
Need, necessity; something required or essential
errou
Wandered or erred; past tense of 'errar'
por
By, through, for; versatile Portuguese preposition
terras
Lands, territories, or regions of the earth
longínquas
Faraway, distant, remote lands or places
distantes
Distant, far away in space or time
depois
After, afterwards; indicates sequence in time
ter
To have; auxiliary and main verb infinitive
saqueado
Sacked, plundered, or pillaged a place
sagrada
Sacred, holy; regarded with religious reverence
cidadela
Citadel; fortified hilltop stronghold of a city
muitos
Many; masculine plural indefinite quantity word
foram
Were; third-person plural past tense of 'ser'
homens
Men; plural of 'homem'
cujas
Whose; feminine plural relative possessive pronoun
cidades
Cities; plural of 'cidade'
ele
He; third-person masculine singular subject pronoun
viu
Saw; third-person singular past of 'ver'
cujo
Whose; masculine singular relative possessive pronoun
espírito
Spirit, mind, inner character of a person
conheceu
Came to know; past tense of 'conhecer'
também
Also, too, as well; additive adverb
sofrimentos
Sufferings, hardships endured by someone
suportou
Endured, bore, or withstood hardship
coração
Heart; organ or seat of emotions
mar
Sea, ocean; large body of salt water
profundo
Deep, profound; of great depth or intensity
lutando
Fighting, struggling; present participle of 'lutar'
salvar
To save, rescue, or preserve from harm
sua
His, her, your; third-person possessive adjective
própria
Own; emphasizes possession or personal belonging
vida
Life; existence or the state of living
regresso
Return, homecoming; act of coming back
seus
His, her, their; plural possessive pronoun
companheiros
Companions, comrades, fellow travelers or soldiers
Mas
But; adversative conjunction indicating contrast
ainda
Still, yet, even; temporal or emphatic adverb
assim
So, thus, in this way; manner adverb
salvou
Saved, rescued; third-person past of 'salvar'
embora
Although, even though; concessive conjunction
desejasse
Desired, wished; imperfect subjunctive of 'desejar'
Pois
For, because, well; explanatory conjunction or filler
pela
By the; contraction of 'por' and 'a'
cegueira
Blindness; inability to see or lack of judgment
próprios
Own; masculine plural emphatic possessive adjective
corações
Hearts; plural of 'coração'
eles
They; third-person masculine plural subject pronoun
pereceram
Perished, died; third-person plural past of 'perecer'
insensatos
Foolish, senseless, reckless individuals
devoraram
Devoured, consumed greedily; past tense of 'devorar'
bois
Oxen, cattle; plural of 'boi'
deus
God; divine being or deity
lhes
To them; third-person plural indirect object pronoun
tirou
Took away, removed; past tense of 'tirar'
dia
Day; period of 24 hours or daylight
Dessas
Of those; contraction of 'de' and 'essas'
ó
O; vocative exclamation used to address someone
deusa
Goddess; female divine being
filha
Daughter; female offspring
onde
Where; relative or interrogative place adverb
quer
Wants; or in 'onde quer' meaning wherever
tenhas
May have; second-person subjunctive of 'ter'
ouvido
Heard; past participle of 'ouvir'
declara-as
Declare them; imperative with feminine object pronoun
nós
Us, we; first-person plural pronoun
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