The Odyssey: Rendered into English prose for the use of those who cannot read the original — Page 4
In the preface to my translation of the "Iliad" I have given my views as to the main principles by which a translator should be guided, and need not repeat them here, beyond pointing out that the initial liberty of translating poetry into prose involves the continual taking of more or less liberty throughout the translation; for much that is right in poetry is wrong in prose, and the exigencies of readable prose are the first things to be considered in a prose translation.
No prefácio da minha tradução da "Ilíada" expus os meus pontos de vista sobre os princípios fundamentais pelos quais um tradutor deve ser guiado, e não preciso repeti-los aqui, além de apontar que a liberdade inicial de traduzir poesia em prosa implica a contínua adoção de maior ou menor liberdade ao longo da tradução; pois muito do que é correto na poesia é errado na prosa, e as exigências de uma prosa legível são as primeiras coisas a serem consideradas numa tradução em prosa.
That the reader, however, may see how far I have departed from strict construe, I will print here Messrs. Butcher and Lang's translation of the sixty lines or so of the "Odyssey."
Para que o leitor, no entanto, possa ver até que ponto me afastei da interpretação estrita, reproduzirei aqui a tradução dos senhores Butcher e Lang das sessenta linhas ou mais da "Odisseia".
Their translation runs:
A tradução deles é a seguinte:
Tell me, Muse, of that man, so ready at need, who wandered far and wide, after he had sacked the sacred citadel of Troy, and many were the men whose towns he saw and whose mind he learnt, yea, and many the woes he suffered in his heart on the deep, striving to win his own life and the return of his company.
Fala-me, Musa, daquele homem tão pronto para a necessidade, que errou por terras longínquas e distantes, depois de ter saqueado a sagrada cidadela de Troia, e muitos foram os homens cujas cidades ele viu e cujo espírito conheceu, e muitos também os sofrimentos que suportou no coração sobre o mar profundo, lutando para salvar a sua própria vida e o regresso dos seus companheiros.
Nay, but even so he saved not his company, though he desired it sore.
Mas ainda assim não salvou os seus companheiros, embora muito o desejasse.
For through the blindness of their own hearts they perished, fools, who devoured the oxen of Helios Hyperion: but the god took from them their day of returning.
Pois pela cegueira dos seus próprios corações eles pereceram, insensatos que devoraram os bois de Hélio Hipérion: mas o deus lhes tirou o dia do regresso.
Of these things, goddess, daughter of Zeus, whencesoever thou hast heard thereof, declare thou even unto us.
Dessas coisas, ó deusa, filha de Zeus, onde quer que as tenhas ouvido, declara-as também a nós.
Vocabulary
- No
- In the; contraction of 'em' and 'o'
- prefácio
- Introductory section of a book; preface
- da
- Of the; contraction of 'de' and 'a'
- minha
- My; first-person singular feminine possessive pronoun
- tradução
- The act of converting text between languages
- expus
- Past tense of 'expor'; I presented or explained
- os
- The; masculine plural definite article
- meus
- My; first-person singular masculine plural possessive
- pontos
- Points, ideas, or topics raised in discussion
- de
- Of, from; common Portuguese preposition
- vista
- View, perspective, or point of observation
- sobre
- About, on, or concerning a topic
- princípios
- Fundamental rules or guiding beliefs
- fundamentais
- Essential, basic, or foundational in nature
- pelos
- By the; contraction of 'por' and 'os'
- quais
- Which; relative or interrogative pronoun, plural
- um
- A, an; masculine singular indefinite article
- tradutor
- Person who translates texts between languages
- deve
- Must, should; third-person singular of 'dever'
- ser
- To be; fundamental Portuguese infinitive verb
- guiado
- Guided, directed, or led by something
- não
- No, not; basic negation word in Portuguese
- preciso
- I need; first-person singular of 'precisar'
- repeti-los
- To repeat them; infinitive with object pronoun
- aqui
- Here; indicates proximity in place or context
- além
- Beyond, besides; indicates addition or distance
- apontar
- To point out or indicate something specifically
- que
- That, which, what; versatile conjunction or pronoun
- a
- The; feminine singular definite article
- liberdade
- Freedom, liberty; absence of restriction
- inicial
- Initial, first, or occurring at the beginning
- traduzir
- To translate text from one language to another
- poesia
- Poetry; literary art form using verse
- em
- In, at, on; common Portuguese preposition
- prosa
- Prose; ordinary written language, not poetry
- implica
- Implies or entails a consequence or condition
- contínua
- Continuous, ongoing, uninterrupted in nature
- adoção
- Adoption; act of choosing or accepting something
- maior
- Greater, larger; comparative adjective in Portuguese
- ou
- Or; disjunctive conjunction linking alternatives
- menor
- Lesser, smaller; comparative adjective in Portuguese
- ao
- To the; contraction of 'a' and 'o'
- longo
- Along, throughout; used in 'ao longo de'
- pois
- Because, for, since; causal conjunction
- muito
- Much, many, a lot; quantity adverb or adjective
- do
- Of the; contraction of 'de' and 'o'
- é
- Is; third-person singular present of 'ser'
- correto
- Correct, right, accurate, or proper
- na
- In the; contraction of 'em' and 'a'
- errado
- Wrong, incorrect, mistaken in judgment or fact
- as
- The; feminine plural definite article
- exigências
- Requirements, demands, or necessary conditions
- uma
- A, an; feminine singular indefinite article
- legível
- Readable, easy to read and understand
- são
- Are; third-person plural present of 'ser'
- primeiras
- First; feminine plural ordinal adjective
- coisas
- Things, items, or matters in general
- serem
- To be; infinitive plural form of 'ser'
- consideradas
- Considered, taken into account or thought about
- numa
- In a; contraction of 'em' and 'uma'
- Para
- For, to, in order to; common preposition
- o
- The; masculine singular definite article
- leitor
- Reader; person who reads a text
- no
- In the; contraction of 'em' and 'o'
- entanto
- However; used in 'no entanto' meaning nevertheless
- possa
- May, can; subjunctive of 'poder'
- ver
- To see; basic visual perception verb
- até
- Until, up to, even; preposition or conjunction
- ponto
- Point, degree, or extent of something
- me
- Me; first-person singular object pronoun
- afastei
- I moved away from or deviated from something
- interpretação
- Interpretation; explanation or understanding of meaning
- estrita
- Strict, literal, or rigorous in application
- reproduzirei
- I will reproduce; future tense of 'reproduzir'
- dos
- Of the; contraction of 'de' and 'os'
- senhores
- Gentlemen, misters; formal plural address
- das
- Of the; contraction of 'de' and 'as'
- sessenta
- Sixty; the number 60
- linhas
- Lines; rows of text in a written work
- mais
- More; comparative adverb or adjective
- A
- The; feminine singular definite article
- deles
- Theirs, of them; third-person plural possessive
- seguinte
- Following, next; what comes immediately after
- Fala-me
- Speak to me; imperative with object pronoun
- daquele
- Of that; contraction of 'de' and 'aquele'
- homem
- Man; adult male human being
- tão
- So, such; intensifying adverb before adjectives
- pronto
- Ready, quick, prompt in response or action
- para
- For, to; preposition indicating purpose or direction
- necessidade
- Need, necessity; something required or essential
- errou
- Wandered or erred; past tense of 'errar'
- por
- By, through, for; versatile Portuguese preposition
- terras
- Lands, territories, or regions of the earth
- longínquas
- Faraway, distant, remote lands or places
- distantes
- Distant, far away in space or time
- depois
- After, afterwards; indicates sequence in time
- ter
- To have; auxiliary and main verb infinitive
- saqueado
- Sacked, plundered, or pillaged a place
- sagrada
- Sacred, holy; regarded with religious reverence
- cidadela
- Citadel; fortified hilltop stronghold of a city
- muitos
- Many; masculine plural indefinite quantity word
- foram
- Were; third-person plural past tense of 'ser'
- homens
- Men; plural of 'homem'
- cujas
- Whose; feminine plural relative possessive pronoun
- cidades
- Cities; plural of 'cidade'
- ele
- He; third-person masculine singular subject pronoun
- viu
- Saw; third-person singular past of 'ver'
- cujo
- Whose; masculine singular relative possessive pronoun
- espírito
- Spirit, mind, inner character of a person
- conheceu
- Came to know; past tense of 'conhecer'
- também
- Also, too, as well; additive adverb
- sofrimentos
- Sufferings, hardships endured by someone
- suportou
- Endured, bore, or withstood hardship
- coração
- Heart; organ or seat of emotions
- mar
- Sea, ocean; large body of salt water
- profundo
- Deep, profound; of great depth or intensity
- lutando
- Fighting, struggling; present participle of 'lutar'
- salvar
- To save, rescue, or preserve from harm
- sua
- His, her, your; third-person possessive adjective
- própria
- Own; emphasizes possession or personal belonging
- vida
- Life; existence or the state of living
- regresso
- Return, homecoming; act of coming back
- seus
- His, her, their; plural possessive pronoun
- companheiros
- Companions, comrades, fellow travelers or soldiers
- Mas
- But; adversative conjunction indicating contrast
- ainda
- Still, yet, even; temporal or emphatic adverb
- assim
- So, thus, in this way; manner adverb
- salvou
- Saved, rescued; third-person past of 'salvar'
- embora
- Although, even though; concessive conjunction
- desejasse
- Desired, wished; imperfect subjunctive of 'desejar'
- Pois
- For, because, well; explanatory conjunction or filler
- pela
- By the; contraction of 'por' and 'a'
- cegueira
- Blindness; inability to see or lack of judgment
- próprios
- Own; masculine plural emphatic possessive adjective
- corações
- Hearts; plural of 'coração'
- eles
- They; third-person masculine plural subject pronoun
- pereceram
- Perished, died; third-person plural past of 'perecer'
- insensatos
- Foolish, senseless, reckless individuals
- devoraram
- Devoured, consumed greedily; past tense of 'devorar'
- bois
- Oxen, cattle; plural of 'boi'
- deus
- God; divine being or deity
- lhes
- To them; third-person plural indirect object pronoun
- tirou
- Took away, removed; past tense of 'tirar'
- dia
- Day; period of 24 hours or daylight
- Dessas
- Of those; contraction of 'de' and 'essas'
- ó
- O; vocative exclamation used to address someone
- deusa
- Goddess; female divine being
- filha
- Daughter; female offspring
- onde
- Where; relative or interrogative place adverb
- quer
- Wants; or in 'onde quer' meaning wherever
- tenhas
- May have; second-person subjunctive of 'ter'
- ouvido
- Heard; past participle of 'ouvir'
- declara-as
- Declare them; imperative with feminine object pronoun
- nós
- Us, we; first-person plural pronoun
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