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English → Korean Preface Level 6/10

In the preface to my translation of the "Iliad" I have given my views as to the main principles by which a translator should be guided, and need not repeat them here, beyond pointing out that the initial liberty of translating poetry into prose involves the continual taking of more or less liberty throughout the translation; for much that is right in poetry is wrong in prose, and the exigencies of readable prose are the first things to be considered in a prose translation.

나의 「일리아드」 번역본 서문에서 나는 번역자가 따라야 할 주요 원칙들에 관한 견해를 밝힌 바 있으므로, 여기서 그것을 반복할 필요는 없다. 다만 시를 산문으로 번역하는 초기의 자유가 번역 전반에 걸쳐 크고 작은 자유를 지속적으로 취하는 것을 수반한다는 점만은 지적해 두고자 한다. 왜냐하면 시에서 옳은 것이 산문에서는 그릇된 경우가 많으며, 읽기 좋은 산문의 요건이 산문 번역에서 가장 먼저 고려되어야 할 사항이기 때문이다.

That the reader, however, may see how far I have departed from strict construe, I will print here Messrs. Butcher and Lang's translation of the sixty lines or so of the "Odyssey."

그러나 독자들이 내가 엄밀한 직역에서 얼마나 벗어났는지를 확인할 수 있도록, 나는 여기에 버처 씨와 랭 씨의 「오디세이」 약 60행 번역을 인용하겠다.

Their translation runs:

그들의 번역은 다음과 같다:

Tell me, Muse, of that man, so ready at need, who wandered far and wide, after he had sacked the sacred citadel of Troy, and many were the men whose towns he saw and whose mind he learnt, yea, and many the woes he suffered in his heart on the deep, striving to win his own life and the return of his company.

뮤즈여, 내게 말해다오, 그 사람에 대해, 어려울 때마다 기지가 넘쳤던 그가 트로이의 신성한 성채를 함락시킨 후 멀리 두루 떠돌아다닌 것을, 그리고 그가 도시들을 보고 그 사람들의 마음을 알게 된 수많은 이들에 대해, 진실로, 자신의 목숨과 동료들의 귀환을 얻으려 애쓰며 망망대해에서 마음속으로 겪은 수많은 고통에 대해.

Nay, but even so he saved not his company, though he desired it sore.

그러나 그토록 바랐음에도 불구하고 그는 동료들을 구하지 못하였다.

For through the blindness of their own hearts they perished, fools, who devoured the oxen of Helios Hyperion: but the god took from them their day of returning.

왜냐하면 그들은 자신들 마음의 어리석음으로 인해 멸망하였으니, 태양신 헬리오스 히페리온의 소를 잡아먹은 어리석은 자들이었기 때문이다. 그러나 신은 그들에게서 귀환의 날을 빼앗아버렸다.

Of these things, goddess, daughter of Zeus, whencesoever thou hast heard thereof, declare thou even unto us.

이 일들에 대해, 제우스의 딸인 여신이여, 그대가 어디서 이를 들었든 간에, 우리에게도 말해다오.

Vocabulary

나의
na-ui — My; possessive pronoun indicating ownership or relation
번역본
beonyeokbon — A translated version or edition of a text
서문에서
seomun-eseo — In the preface; from the introductory section of a book
나는
na-neun — I; first-person singular subject marker
번역자가
beonyeokja-ga — The translator; person who converts text between languages
따라야
ttaraya — Must follow; obliged to adhere to something
hal — To do; auxiliary indicating future or obligation
주요
juyo — Main; principal; most important
원칙들에
wonchikdeul-e — To/regarding principles; fundamental rules or guidelines
관한
gwanhan — Concerning; related to; about a topic
견해를
gyeonhae-reul — A viewpoint or opinion on a matter
밝힌
balkin — Clarified; stated; made clear or expressed openly
ba — The fact that; nominalizer indicating a previously done action
있으므로
isseumeuro — Because there is; since it exists or has been done
여기서
yeogiseo — Here; at this place or point
그것을
geugeot-eul — It; that thing (object form)
반복할
banbokhal — To repeat; to say or do again
필요는
piryo-neun — The necessity; a need for something
없다
eopda — There is not; does not exist
다만
daman — However; only; merely; just one point aside
시를
si-reul — Poetry; a poem (object form)
산문으로
sanmun-euro — Into prose; in the form of prose writing
번역하는
beonyeokhaneun — Translating; the act of rendering text into another language
초기의
chogi-ui — Initial; early; of the beginning stage
자유가
jayu-ga — Freedom; liberty; the freedom (subject form)
번역
beonyeok — Translation; the process of converting between languages
전반에
jeonban-e — Throughout; across the entirety of something
걸쳐
geolchyeo — Spanning; extending across a range or period
크고
keuko — Big and; large in size or degree
작은
jageun — Small; little; minor in size or degree
자유를
jayu-reul — Freedom; liberty (object form)
지속적으로
jisokjeogeuro — Continuously; in a sustained or ongoing manner
취하는
chwihaneun — Taking; adopting a stance or exercising a liberty
것을
geot-eul — The thing; nominalizer used as object of a verb
수반한다는
subanhandan-eun — Entails; involves; accompanies as a necessary consequence
점만은
jeomman-eun — Only the point that; specifically this one aspect
지적해
jijeokhae — Point out; indicate; call attention to something
두고자
dugoja — Intending to leave; wishing to note for reference
한다
handa — Does; a declarative ending indicating an action or state
왜냐하면
waenyahamyeon — Because; the reason being; used to introduce an explanation
시에서
si-eseo — In poetry; within the context of a poem
옳은
oreun — Correct; right; proper or appropriate
것이
geot-i — The thing that; nominalizer as subject of a clause
산문에서는
sanmun-eseoneun — In prose; within the context of prose writing
그릇된
geureutdoen — Wrong; mistaken; improper or incorrect
경우가
gyeongu-ga — Cases where; instances or situations (subject form)
많으며
maneumyeo — There are many; numerous instances exist
읽기
ikgi — Reading; the act of reading text
좋은
joeun — Good; pleasant; of high quality
산문의
sanmun-ui — Of prose; belonging to or characteristic of prose
요건이
yogeon-i — Requirements; necessary conditions (subject form)
가장
gajang — Most; the superlative degree of an adjective or adverb
먼저
meonjeo — First; beforehand; prior to other things
고려되어야
goryeodoeoya — Must be considered; needs to be taken into account
사항이기
sahang-igi — Being a matter or item; a concern or consideration
때문이다
ttaemun-ida — It is because; the reason is; used to conclude explanation
그러나
geureona — However; but; expressing contrast or contradiction
독자들이
dokjadeul-i — Readers; the audience of a written work (subject form)
내가
nae-ga — I; first-person subject in a subordinate clause
엄밀한
eommilhan — Strict; rigorous; precise and exact
직역에서
jigyeok-eseo — From literal translation; word-for-word rendering
얼마나
eolmana — How much; to what extent or degree
벗어났는지를
beoseonnanneunji-reul — How far one has deviated or strayed from something
확인할
hwaginhal — To confirm; to verify or check something
su — Ability; possibility; can (auxiliary noun)
있도록
itdorok — So that one can; in order to make possible
여기에
yeogi-e — Here; at this place (locative form)
씨와
ssi-wa — Mr./Ms. and; honorific title with conjunctive particle
씨의
ssi-ui — Mr./Ms.'s; honorific title with possessive particle
yak — About; approximately; roughly a given quantity
60행
yuksip haeng — 60 lines; sixty lines of text
번역을
beonyeok-eul — Translation (object form); the translated text
인용하겠다
inyonghagetta — Will quote; intend to cite a passage from a source
그들의
geudeul-ui — Their; belonging to them (possessive form)
번역은
beonyeok-eun — The translation (topic form); their rendered text
다음과
daeum-gwa — As follows; the following (with conjunctive particle)
같다
gatda — Is the same; is as follows; equivalent to something
내게
naege — To me; for me (dative form of first person)
말해다오
malhae-dao — Please tell me; an imperative requesting someone to speak
geu — That; the; a determiner pointing to something mentioned
사람에
saram-e — About the person; regarding the man (locative form)
대해
daehae — About; concerning; regarding a topic or person
어려울
eoryeoul — Difficult; hard; challenging (future/modifier form)
때마다
ttaemada — Every time; whenever a certain moment occurs
기지가
giji-ga — Resourcefulness; wit; quick thinking in difficult situations
넘쳤던
neomchyeotdeon — Was overflowing with; abounded in (past modifier form)
그가
geu-ga — He; that person (subject form)
신성한
sinseonghan — Sacred; holy; divine in nature
성채를
seongchae-reul — The citadel; a fortified stronghold (object form)
함락시킨
hamnak-sikin — Captured; caused to fall; conquered a fortified place
hu — After; following a certain event or time
멀리
meolli — Far away; at a great distance
두루
duru — All around; widely; throughout various places
떠돌아다닌
tteodora-danin — Wandered around; roamed about aimlessly over many places
그리고
geurigo — And; also; additionally connecting two clauses
도시들을
dosideul-eul — Cities; urban settlements (plural object form)
보고
bogo — Seeing; having seen; after observing something
사람들의
saramdeul-ui — Of people; belonging to many persons
마음을
maeum-eul — Mind; heart; the inner thoughts or feelings (object form)
알게
alge — Coming to know; getting to understand something
doen — Having become; having come to be in a state
수많은
sumaneun — Numerous; countless; a very large number of
이들에
ideul-e — Among these people; to or regarding these individuals
진실로
jinsilro — Truly; indeed; in earnest or sincerity
자신의
jasin-ui — One's own; belonging to oneself
목숨과
moksum-gwa — Life and; one's existence (with conjunctive particle)
동료들의
dongnyodeul-ui — Of companions; belonging to fellow members of a group
귀환을
gwihwan-eul — The return home; homecoming (object form)
얻으려
eodeuryeo — In order to obtain; trying to gain something
애쓰며
aesseuomyeo — Striving; making great effort while doing something
망망대해에서
mangmangdaehae-eseo — On the vast open sea; in the boundless ocean
마음속으로
maeumsok-euro — Inwardly; deep in one's heart or mind
겪은
gyeokkeun — Experienced; suffered; went through hardship
고통에
gotong-e — In/at suffering; regarding pain or anguish
그토록
geutorok — So much; to that extent; that greatly
바랐음에도
baraeteumedo — Even though one wished; despite having hoped for something
불구하고
bulguhago — Despite; regardless of; in spite of a circumstance
그는
geu-neun — He; that person (topic form)
동료들을
dongnyodeul-eul — Companions; fellow members (plural object form)
구하지
guhaji — Save; rescue (negative connector form)
못하였다
motahyeotda — Could not do; was unable to accomplish something
그들은
geudeul-eun — They; those people (topic form)
자신들
jasindeul — Themselves; the plural reflexive pronoun
마음의
maeum-ui — Of the mind/heart; pertaining to inner thoughts
어리석음으로
eoriseogeumeuro — Due to foolishness; because of one's own stupidity
인해
inhae — Due to; because of; as a result of something
멸망하였으니
myeolmanghayeotseuni — Perished; were destroyed; met their ruin (causal ending)
태양신
taeyangshin — Sun god; deity associated with the sun
소를
so-reul — Cattle; cows; oxen (object form)
잡아먹은
jabameogeun — Slaughtered and ate; killed and consumed animals
어리석은
eoriseogeun — Foolish; stupid; lacking good judgment
자들이었기
jadeul-iyeotgi — Because they were persons who; those individuals being so
신은
sin-eun — The god; deity (topic form)
그들에게서
geudeul-egeseo — From them; away from those people
귀환의
gwihwan-ui — Of return; pertaining to going back home
날을
nal-eul — The day; a particular day (object form)
빼앗아버렸다
ppaeasabeolyeotda — Took away completely; robbed them of something entirely
i — This; a demonstrative determiner for nearby things
일들에
ildeul-e — Regarding these matters; about these events
딸인
ttalin — Who is a daughter; being the daughter of someone
여신이여
yeoshin-iyeo — O goddess!; a vocative address to a female deity
그대가
geudae-ga — You; a literary or poetic second-person subject form
어디서
eodiseo — From where; wherever; at what place
이를
i-reul — This; these things (object form)
들었든
deureotdeun — Wherever you may have heard; regardless of where learned
간에
gan-e — Regardless of; no matter which; used in concessive phrases
우리에게도
uri-egeddo — To us also; for us as well
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