The Odyssey: Rendered into English prose for the use of those who cannot read the original — Page 4
In the preface to my translation of the "Iliad" I have given my views as to the main principles by which a translator should be guided, and need not repeat them here, beyond pointing out that the initial liberty of translating poetry into prose involves the continual taking of more or less liberty throughout the translation; for much that is right in poetry is wrong in prose, and the exigencies of readable prose are the first things to be considered in a prose translation.
나의 「일리아드」 번역본 서문에서 나는 번역자가 따라야 할 주요 원칙들에 관한 견해를 밝힌 바 있으므로, 여기서 그것을 반복할 필요는 없다. 다만 시를 산문으로 번역하는 초기의 자유가 번역 전반에 걸쳐 크고 작은 자유를 지속적으로 취하는 것을 수반한다는 점만은 지적해 두고자 한다. 왜냐하면 시에서 옳은 것이 산문에서는 그릇된 경우가 많으며, 읽기 좋은 산문의 요건이 산문 번역에서 가장 먼저 고려되어야 할 사항이기 때문이다.
That the reader, however, may see how far I have departed from strict construe, I will print here Messrs. Butcher and Lang's translation of the sixty lines or so of the "Odyssey."
그러나 독자들이 내가 엄밀한 직역에서 얼마나 벗어났는지를 확인할 수 있도록, 나는 여기에 버처 씨와 랭 씨의 「오디세이」 약 60행 번역을 인용하겠다.
Their translation runs:
그들의 번역은 다음과 같다:
Tell me, Muse, of that man, so ready at need, who wandered far and wide, after he had sacked the sacred citadel of Troy, and many were the men whose towns he saw and whose mind he learnt, yea, and many the woes he suffered in his heart on the deep, striving to win his own life and the return of his company.
뮤즈여, 내게 말해다오, 그 사람에 대해, 어려울 때마다 기지가 넘쳤던 그가 트로이의 신성한 성채를 함락시킨 후 멀리 두루 떠돌아다닌 것을, 그리고 그가 도시들을 보고 그 사람들의 마음을 알게 된 수많은 이들에 대해, 진실로, 자신의 목숨과 동료들의 귀환을 얻으려 애쓰며 망망대해에서 마음속으로 겪은 수많은 고통에 대해.
Nay, but even so he saved not his company, though he desired it sore.
그러나 그토록 바랐음에도 불구하고 그는 동료들을 구하지 못하였다.
For through the blindness of their own hearts they perished, fools, who devoured the oxen of Helios Hyperion: but the god took from them their day of returning.
왜냐하면 그들은 자신들 마음의 어리석음으로 인해 멸망하였으니, 태양신 헬리오스 히페리온의 소를 잡아먹은 어리석은 자들이었기 때문이다. 그러나 신은 그들에게서 귀환의 날을 빼앗아버렸다.
Of these things, goddess, daughter of Zeus, whencesoever thou hast heard thereof, declare thou even unto us.
이 일들에 대해, 제우스의 딸인 여신이여, 그대가 어디서 이를 들었든 간에, 우리에게도 말해다오.
Vocabulary
- 나의
- na-ui — My; possessive pronoun indicating ownership or relation
- 번역본
- beonyeokbon — A translated version or edition of a text
- 서문에서
- seomun-eseo — In the preface; from the introductory section of a book
- 나는
- na-neun — I; first-person singular subject marker
- 번역자가
- beonyeokja-ga — The translator; person who converts text between languages
- 따라야
- ttaraya — Must follow; obliged to adhere to something
- 할
- hal — To do; auxiliary indicating future or obligation
- 주요
- juyo — Main; principal; most important
- 원칙들에
- wonchikdeul-e — To/regarding principles; fundamental rules or guidelines
- 관한
- gwanhan — Concerning; related to; about a topic
- 견해를
- gyeonhae-reul — A viewpoint or opinion on a matter
- 밝힌
- balkin — Clarified; stated; made clear or expressed openly
- 바
- ba — The fact that; nominalizer indicating a previously done action
- 있으므로
- isseumeuro — Because there is; since it exists or has been done
- 여기서
- yeogiseo — Here; at this place or point
- 그것을
- geugeot-eul — It; that thing (object form)
- 반복할
- banbokhal — To repeat; to say or do again
- 필요는
- piryo-neun — The necessity; a need for something
- 없다
- eopda — There is not; does not exist
- 다만
- daman — However; only; merely; just one point aside
- 시를
- si-reul — Poetry; a poem (object form)
- 산문으로
- sanmun-euro — Into prose; in the form of prose writing
- 번역하는
- beonyeokhaneun — Translating; the act of rendering text into another language
- 초기의
- chogi-ui — Initial; early; of the beginning stage
- 자유가
- jayu-ga — Freedom; liberty; the freedom (subject form)
- 번역
- beonyeok — Translation; the process of converting between languages
- 전반에
- jeonban-e — Throughout; across the entirety of something
- 걸쳐
- geolchyeo — Spanning; extending across a range or period
- 크고
- keuko — Big and; large in size or degree
- 작은
- jageun — Small; little; minor in size or degree
- 자유를
- jayu-reul — Freedom; liberty (object form)
- 지속적으로
- jisokjeogeuro — Continuously; in a sustained or ongoing manner
- 취하는
- chwihaneun — Taking; adopting a stance or exercising a liberty
- 것을
- geot-eul — The thing; nominalizer used as object of a verb
- 수반한다는
- subanhandan-eun — Entails; involves; accompanies as a necessary consequence
- 점만은
- jeomman-eun — Only the point that; specifically this one aspect
- 지적해
- jijeokhae — Point out; indicate; call attention to something
- 두고자
- dugoja — Intending to leave; wishing to note for reference
- 한다
- handa — Does; a declarative ending indicating an action or state
- 왜냐하면
- waenyahamyeon — Because; the reason being; used to introduce an explanation
- 시에서
- si-eseo — In poetry; within the context of a poem
- 옳은
- oreun — Correct; right; proper or appropriate
- 것이
- geot-i — The thing that; nominalizer as subject of a clause
- 산문에서는
- sanmun-eseoneun — In prose; within the context of prose writing
- 그릇된
- geureutdoen — Wrong; mistaken; improper or incorrect
- 경우가
- gyeongu-ga — Cases where; instances or situations (subject form)
- 많으며
- maneumyeo — There are many; numerous instances exist
- 읽기
- ikgi — Reading; the act of reading text
- 좋은
- joeun — Good; pleasant; of high quality
- 산문의
- sanmun-ui — Of prose; belonging to or characteristic of prose
- 요건이
- yogeon-i — Requirements; necessary conditions (subject form)
- 가장
- gajang — Most; the superlative degree of an adjective or adverb
- 먼저
- meonjeo — First; beforehand; prior to other things
- 고려되어야
- goryeodoeoya — Must be considered; needs to be taken into account
- 사항이기
- sahang-igi — Being a matter or item; a concern or consideration
- 때문이다
- ttaemun-ida — It is because; the reason is; used to conclude explanation
- 그러나
- geureona — However; but; expressing contrast or contradiction
- 독자들이
- dokjadeul-i — Readers; the audience of a written work (subject form)
- 내가
- nae-ga — I; first-person subject in a subordinate clause
- 엄밀한
- eommilhan — Strict; rigorous; precise and exact
- 직역에서
- jigyeok-eseo — From literal translation; word-for-word rendering
- 얼마나
- eolmana — How much; to what extent or degree
- 벗어났는지를
- beoseonnanneunji-reul — How far one has deviated or strayed from something
- 확인할
- hwaginhal — To confirm; to verify or check something
- 수
- su — Ability; possibility; can (auxiliary noun)
- 있도록
- itdorok — So that one can; in order to make possible
- 여기에
- yeogi-e — Here; at this place (locative form)
- 씨와
- ssi-wa — Mr./Ms. and; honorific title with conjunctive particle
- 씨의
- ssi-ui — Mr./Ms.'s; honorific title with possessive particle
- 약
- yak — About; approximately; roughly a given quantity
- 60행
- yuksip haeng — 60 lines; sixty lines of text
- 번역을
- beonyeok-eul — Translation (object form); the translated text
- 인용하겠다
- inyonghagetta — Will quote; intend to cite a passage from a source
- 그들의
- geudeul-ui — Their; belonging to them (possessive form)
- 번역은
- beonyeok-eun — The translation (topic form); their rendered text
- 다음과
- daeum-gwa — As follows; the following (with conjunctive particle)
- 같다
- gatda — Is the same; is as follows; equivalent to something
- 내게
- naege — To me; for me (dative form of first person)
- 말해다오
- malhae-dao — Please tell me; an imperative requesting someone to speak
- 그
- geu — That; the; a determiner pointing to something mentioned
- 사람에
- saram-e — About the person; regarding the man (locative form)
- 대해
- daehae — About; concerning; regarding a topic or person
- 어려울
- eoryeoul — Difficult; hard; challenging (future/modifier form)
- 때마다
- ttaemada — Every time; whenever a certain moment occurs
- 기지가
- giji-ga — Resourcefulness; wit; quick thinking in difficult situations
- 넘쳤던
- neomchyeotdeon — Was overflowing with; abounded in (past modifier form)
- 그가
- geu-ga — He; that person (subject form)
- 신성한
- sinseonghan — Sacred; holy; divine in nature
- 성채를
- seongchae-reul — The citadel; a fortified stronghold (object form)
- 함락시킨
- hamnak-sikin — Captured; caused to fall; conquered a fortified place
- 후
- hu — After; following a certain event or time
- 멀리
- meolli — Far away; at a great distance
- 두루
- duru — All around; widely; throughout various places
- 떠돌아다닌
- tteodora-danin — Wandered around; roamed about aimlessly over many places
- 그리고
- geurigo — And; also; additionally connecting two clauses
- 도시들을
- dosideul-eul — Cities; urban settlements (plural object form)
- 보고
- bogo — Seeing; having seen; after observing something
- 사람들의
- saramdeul-ui — Of people; belonging to many persons
- 마음을
- maeum-eul — Mind; heart; the inner thoughts or feelings (object form)
- 알게
- alge — Coming to know; getting to understand something
- 된
- doen — Having become; having come to be in a state
- 수많은
- sumaneun — Numerous; countless; a very large number of
- 이들에
- ideul-e — Among these people; to or regarding these individuals
- 진실로
- jinsilro — Truly; indeed; in earnest or sincerity
- 자신의
- jasin-ui — One's own; belonging to oneself
- 목숨과
- moksum-gwa — Life and; one's existence (with conjunctive particle)
- 동료들의
- dongnyodeul-ui — Of companions; belonging to fellow members of a group
- 귀환을
- gwihwan-eul — The return home; homecoming (object form)
- 얻으려
- eodeuryeo — In order to obtain; trying to gain something
- 애쓰며
- aesseuomyeo — Striving; making great effort while doing something
- 망망대해에서
- mangmangdaehae-eseo — On the vast open sea; in the boundless ocean
- 마음속으로
- maeumsok-euro — Inwardly; deep in one's heart or mind
- 겪은
- gyeokkeun — Experienced; suffered; went through hardship
- 고통에
- gotong-e — In/at suffering; regarding pain or anguish
- 그토록
- geutorok — So much; to that extent; that greatly
- 바랐음에도
- baraeteumedo — Even though one wished; despite having hoped for something
- 불구하고
- bulguhago — Despite; regardless of; in spite of a circumstance
- 그는
- geu-neun — He; that person (topic form)
- 동료들을
- dongnyodeul-eul — Companions; fellow members (plural object form)
- 구하지
- guhaji — Save; rescue (negative connector form)
- 못하였다
- motahyeotda — Could not do; was unable to accomplish something
- 그들은
- geudeul-eun — They; those people (topic form)
- 자신들
- jasindeul — Themselves; the plural reflexive pronoun
- 마음의
- maeum-ui — Of the mind/heart; pertaining to inner thoughts
- 어리석음으로
- eoriseogeumeuro — Due to foolishness; because of one's own stupidity
- 인해
- inhae — Due to; because of; as a result of something
- 멸망하였으니
- myeolmanghayeotseuni — Perished; were destroyed; met their ruin (causal ending)
- 태양신
- taeyangshin — Sun god; deity associated with the sun
- 소를
- so-reul — Cattle; cows; oxen (object form)
- 잡아먹은
- jabameogeun — Slaughtered and ate; killed and consumed animals
- 어리석은
- eoriseogeun — Foolish; stupid; lacking good judgment
- 자들이었기
- jadeul-iyeotgi — Because they were persons who; those individuals being so
- 신은
- sin-eun — The god; deity (topic form)
- 그들에게서
- geudeul-egeseo — From them; away from those people
- 귀환의
- gwihwan-ui — Of return; pertaining to going back home
- 날을
- nal-eul — The day; a particular day (object form)
- 빼앗아버렸다
- ppaeasabeolyeotda — Took away completely; robbed them of something entirely
- 이
- i — This; a demonstrative determiner for nearby things
- 일들에
- ildeul-e — Regarding these matters; about these events
- 딸인
- ttalin — Who is a daughter; being the daughter of someone
- 여신이여
- yeoshin-iyeo — O goddess!; a vocative address to a female deity
- 그대가
- geudae-ga — You; a literary or poetic second-person subject form
- 어디서
- eodiseo — From where; wherever; at what place
- 이를
- i-reul — This; these things (object form)
- 들었든
- deureotdeun — Wherever you may have heard; regardless of where learned
- 간에
- gan-e — Regardless of; no matter which; used in concessive phrases
- 우리에게도
- uri-egeddo — To us also; for us as well
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